Strengths:
-What I'm exploring
-Comparing and Contrasting
-Specific topic that should have a lot of information
-compare/and contrast section
-interesting to include alternatives/ veganism, etc. Good idea for those opposed to my view.
Weaknesses:
-for #4 may want to explore companies like chipotle buying products from places using more humane methods
-what is human vs. animals? unpack (go before) #1
-alternative points of view
-humans vs animals?
-needs specific examples include u.s laws concerning animal factory farming
-make sure I have good strong supporting points, try to avoid only emotional content
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